Great job Jake, I liked how it was fluent and sounded great. I couldn't find any errors except for the fact that it was kind of hard to see because it was on paper. Keep up the good work!
i like how you sounded and i didnt find anything wrong. and i also agree with kyle i couldnt see your paper
dear Jake you did good I like you sing and have a nice day bye see you latter JAKE
I like your paper how it show's that + = a pazey and - = angey. :)